CNN Interviews EduPlan

Posted by: News Desk on Mar 31 2009 / Comments (1)

Here is our most recent CNN interview on job search tools and how to best present yourself when meeting employers. The interview was conducted with Gabriela Frias – sorry, only available in Spanish.

Nuestra mas reciente entrevista con CNN en Espanol, tratando los temas de elaboracion de resumes u hojas de vida, cartas de presentacion, y como presentarse efectivamente frente a companias empleadoras.

CareerBuilder Quotes EduPlan

Posted by: News Desk on Jun 11 2009 / Comments (0)

In the article “Help, My Job Search is Taking Years”, Rachel Zupek from CareerBuilder provides opinions from job seekers and career coaching experts, including EduPlan Principal, Claudine Vainrub, on how to enhance job search results.

Read this valuable information to find tips on how to get ahead in your job search, if you have been looking for a while without results.

CareerBuilder is the leading publication with news on career advancement, job search, resume writing and other topics concerning professionals seeking for career development and growth.

Congratulations to our Wonderful Students!

Posted by: Claudine Vainrub, Principal of EduPlan on Apr 6 2010 / Comments (0)

To this year’s EduPlan superachievers – Yes! This means you!

We are so proud of your successes! You worked hard to achieve your best, and we are thrilled that colleges and universities all across the U.S. recognized your talent! Full rides and partial scholarships recognize to an even higher extent that you led this process while giving the best of yourself!

We know you will be successful in the next stage of your life, as you were throughout the college and grad school admissions process. It is now time to breath and think, where do I fit in best? Which school can support me best in achieving most professional goals? We know that your choice will be the right one, and are here to help you make this tough decision successfully. We are in awe of your accomplishment! Here are a few of the schools recognizing the talent of EduPlan students, not only with admissions but also by granting full and partial scholarships…

  • Amherst College
  • University of Pennsylvania
  • University of Michigan
  • Penn State University
  • Georgetown University
  • University of Miami
  • University of Florida
  • Emory University
  • Eckerd College
  • Florida International University
  • Hofstra University
  • Suffolk University
  • Ivey
  • Ithaca College
  • Boston University
  • Syracuse University
  • University of Central Florida
  • Bentley University
  • New College of Florida
  • University of Central Florida
  • Fordham University
  • Wagner College
  • Lynn University
  • Yeshiva University
  • Jacksonville University
  • St. Thomas University
  • Nova Southeastern University

And so many more…

Congratulations undergraduate classes of 2014 and graduate classes of 2012!

Graduate Admissions Event

Posted by: News Desk on Apr 15 2010 / Comments (0)

The Association of International Graduate Admissions Consultants – AIGAC is hosting the worldwide event

Graduate Admissions Virtual Summit:
“Discover how you can position your application for Success”

Learn from Expert Graduate Admissions Counselors on how to get ahead of the game in Grad School Admissions.

Our own EduPlan Principal, Claudine Vainrub, will be hosting the webinar directed to Spanish Speakers

Latino Americanos y MBA’s- Como Diferenciarse? (Latin Americans and MBA’s- How to Differentiate Yourself?)

Click on the links to visit the event page and register for the conference.

Don’t miss out on this special event!

Leadership for College Admissions

Posted by: Claudine Vainrub, Principal of EduPlan on Aug 31 2010 / Comments (0)

Thomas Paine once said: “Lead, follow, or get out of the way.” General George S. Patton describes it further: “We herd sheep, we drive cattle, we lead people. Lead me, follow me, or get out of my way.”  When it comes to college admissions, schools are looking for neither sheep nor cattle but leaders, and while not every student can be President of the Student Government Association, there are other ways for the college applicant to engage in activities that help develop leadership experience.

“Leadership is a matter of intelligence, trustworthiness, humaneness, courage, and discipline . . . Reliance on intelligence alone results in rebelliousness. Exercise of humaneness alone results in weakness. Fixation on trust results in folly. Dependence on the strength of courage results in violence. Excessive discipline and sternness in command result in cruelty. When one has all five virtues together, each appropriate to its function, then one can be a leader.”
Sun Tzu

Creative Leadership

Whether you participate in the A/V Club, the theater department, Glee club, or other activities that are creative in nature, there are opportunities within that structure for you to lead. Whether you write and perform a one-act play, film a documentary about a topic that interest you, organize a charity event, develop a new dance routine, there are countless ways you can lead.

“The task of the leader is to get his people from where they are to where they have not been.”
Henry Kissinger

Political Leadership

You don’t have to be the most popular person to get involved with high school politics or even the real-world politics of your city or town. High school is a great place to run for Secretary, Treasurer, Chairperson, etc. It’s important to remember that colleges are impressed by students who get re-elected and show consistency, so try to hold the same position or be involved with the same organization for three or four years. If you belong to a private academy, consider joining the Honor Board where you will enforce violations of the honor code, such as plagiarism. Outside your school you can consider getting involved with candidates running for office for the local or state level. Politicians love volunteers who visit voters, stuff envelopes, place signs, make phone calls, attend rallies and provide free help to their campaigns.

Entrepreneurial Leadership

In 2002, Fraser Doherty was only 14 and using her grandmother’s recipes to make jam. People loved them so much that eventually she had to rent a a food-processing factory several times a month to keep out with all the orders.  In 2009, SuperJam made $750,000 in sales. If you prefer the online world, consider the story of teen millionaire Ashley Qualls, she “started her Internet business in 2004, at the age of 14. As a graphic designer and programmer, she put together MySpace layouts for free download on the internet. Teens loved her layouts, and shared them with others. Now, her small business, WhateverLife.com, averages over 1 million hits a month, according to Alexa.com. Also, Quantcast has rated this teen’s business site higher than Oprah’s sites, CBS and FoxNews. According to a CBS interview, her Internet business income is over a million dollars a year. She bought a house for her family and paid cash, moving them out of the 1 bedroom apartment they were living in. Not bad for an initial investment of under $10.”
Source: http://www.suite101.com/content/becoming-a-millionaire-with-internet-business-a151415

While it’s true that most teenagers won’t become millionaires by starting a business, colleges will admire your entrepreneurial spirit whether you work as a babysitter, landscaper, shovel snow, develop a blog, sell stuff on eBay, among many other possibilities. Consider these 10 business ideas for the young entrepreneur: http://www.youngentrepreneur.com/blog/10-business-ideas-for-the-teen-entrepreneur/

“Contrary to the opinion of many people, leaders are not born. Leaders are made, and they are made by effort and hard work.”
Vince Lombardi,

Non-Profit Leadership

In Florida all students are supposed to volunteer during their high school years in order to graduate. This kind of mandatory volunteering does not impress colleges; what will impress them are candidates that have been volunteers for organizations such as Habitat for Humanity for a few years out of their own free will. So whether you have a passion for saving the whales, fighting poverty, working against global warming, leading religious missionary groups, etc, exercising that passion early will give you a chance to get to know that organization and maybe have a chance at leading new volunteers, programs, training, etc. You can also fundraise for worthy causes, such as an undersupplied library, a local class that lacks enough materials, even an animal shelter that needs more water bowls.

“Leadership: The art of getting someone else to do something you want done because he wants to do it.”
Dwight D. Eisenhower

Sports Leadership

It seems obvious, but if you participate in sports you are developing qualities that the great majority of universities love. Let’s face it, everyone loves an athlete, ask the high school quarterback where would he be without his coveted position? Or consider athletes without the highest GPA’s and SAT scores that otherwise might not have impressive profiles for admissions but thanks to their athletic abilities are getting offered full scholarships. Even if you don’t play a sport that helps colleges make a lot of money, your abilities and individual achievements in such sport can still be interesting for adcoms.

“To have long term success as a coach or in any position of leadership, you have to be obsessed in some way.”
Pat Riley

Military Leadership

Nothing teaches leadership like the military, and if you join the Junior Reserve Officers’ Training Corps (JROTC) during high school you can develop self-reliance, patriotism, physical fitness, and achieve a higher rank if you decide to pursue a military career after graduation (as long as you participate in JROTC for 2 to 4 years).  Many cadets participate in activities such as drill, color guard, rocketry or orienteering while at least two-thirds enjoy rifle marksmanship programs. If you don’t live in the United States, consider that countries like the United Kingdom, Australia and Canada have similar programs.

The very essence of leadership is its purpose. And the purpose of leadership is to accomplish a task. That is what leadership does–and what it does is more important than what it is or how it works.
~Colonel Dandridge M. Malone 

In the end, in order to show leadership it is better to excel in one or two activities than to be mediocre in several activities.  Remember the words of James Miller, director of admissions at Brown University: “It’s most important to do something with enthusiasm, passion and commitment.” When planning extra-curricular occupations and think of leadership opportunities, be true to yourself, find things to do that you feel passionate about and everything will come together – leadership, continuance, success in college admission and in life.

Tackling the College Interview

Posted by: Claudine Vainrub, Principal of EduPlan on Aug 30 2010 / Comments (0)

If you want to show a college that you’re more than your SAT score and your cumulative GPA, the college interview is the perfect place to do it. While interviews aren’t mandatory, the 30 to 60 minutes you’ll spend with an admissions officer can affect the outcome of your college application.

The great thing about interviews is that they can help you show your warm and shining personality and allow you to learn more about study abroad opportunities or other programs that interest you. Interviews can also help you explain a negative, such as why your grades went south.

Did you know? Students attending music, drama or dance school programs should plan on performing an audition or showing a portfolio.

Interview Tips:

Source: http://www.campusgrotto.com/the-college-interview.html

  • Dress business casual. Do not over do it, however do not wear jeans and a sweatshirt. A nice pair of slacks and a jacket for young men will work and a knee length skirt and casual blouse for ladies will suffice.
  • Come prepared. Bring your high school transcript and if you have any college credit, bring that transcript as well. Be prepared to explain any discrepancies in your records such as less than stellar grades, or numerous absences.
  • Bring a list of questions. You probably have a few questions about your prospective school, so write them down and bring the list with you to the interview.
  • Be on time. Make sure that you are early or on time to your interview. Tardiness is frowned upon and any reason you have for being late will just make it sound like you are making unnecessary excuses.

The Art of Interviewing

From people who talk too little to candidates who come with prepared speeches, there are many ways you can look foolish in front of an admissions officer. Your job is to demonstrate you can make an intellectual contribution to the campus, so giving thoughtful answers that sound genuine as opposed to a prepared speech is the best way to go.

You should also avoid chewing gum, letting your parents ask more questions than you do, show disinterest, lie or be rude. Simple things like shaking hands and addressing your interviewer by name can go a long way, not to mention a mailed “thank you” note as opposed to an impersonal e-mail.

It is also imperative to research the college before the interview. Not only will your knowledge of the college impress your admissions officer, it will also help you figure out if this is the right place for you.

College Interview Questions

From “tell me about yourself” to “what did you do this summer,” colleges seem to want to know everything to ensure that you’re a good match for them. Here’s how to approach some of the tough questions:

1. Tell me about yourself.

This question seems easier than it is. How do you reduce your whole life to a few sentences? And it’s hard to avoid commonplace answers like “I’m friendly” or “I’m a good student.” Of course you want to demonstrate that you’re friendly and studious, but try also to say something memorable here that really makes you different from other college applicants. Can you hold your breath longer than anyone in your school? Do you have a huge collection of Pez dispensers? Do you have unusual cravings for sushi?
Source: http://collegeapps.about.com/od/theartofgettingaccepted/tp/college-interview-questions.htm

2. Who in your life has most influenced you?

There are other variations of this question: Who’s your hero? What historical or fictional character would you most like to be like? This can be an awkward question if you haven’t thought about it, so spend a few minutes considering how you would answer. Identify a few real, historical, and fictional characters you admire, and be prepared to articulate WHY you admire them.

Source: http://collegeapps.about.com/od/theartofgettingaccepted/tp/college-interview-questions.htm

3. Why do you want to major in ______________ ?

Realize that you don’t need to have decided upon a major when you apply to college, and your interviewer will not be disappointed if you say you have many interests and you need to take more classes before choosing a major. However, if you have identified a potential major, be prepared to explain why. Avoid saying that you want to major in something because you’ll make a lot of money — your passion for a subject will make you a good college student, not your greed.

Source: http://collegeapps.about.com/od/theartofgettingaccepted/tp/college-interview-questions.htm

4. Tell me about a challenge that you overcame.

This question is designed to see what kind of problem solver you are. When confronted with a challenge, how do you handle the situation? College will be full of challenges, so the college wants to make sure they enroll students who can handle them.

Source: http://collegeapps.about.com/od/theartofgettingaccepted/tp/college-interview-questions.htm

5. What do you do for fun in your free time?

“Hangin’ out and chillin’” is a weak answer for this question. College life obviously isn’t all work, so the admissions folks want students who will do interesting and productive things even when they aren’t studying. Do you write? hike? play tennis? Use a question such as this one to show that you are well-rounded with a variety of interests.

Source: http://collegeapps.about.com/od/theartofgettingaccepted/tp/college-interview-questions.htm

6. What do you see yourself doing 10 years from now?

You don’t need to pretend that you have your life figured out if you get a question like this. Very few students entering college could accurately predict their future professions. However, your interviewer does want to see that you think ahead. If you can see yourself doing three different things, say so — honesty and open-mindedness will play in your favor.

Source: http://collegeapps.about.com/od/theartofgettingaccepted/tp/college-interview-questions.htm

7. Does your high school record accurately reflect your effort and ability?

In the interview or on your application, you often have an opportunity to explain a bad grade or a bad semester. Be careful with this issue — you don’t want to come across as as a whiner or as someone who blames others for a low grade. However, if you really did have extenuating circumstances, let the college know.

Source: http://collegeapps.about.com/od/theartofgettingaccepted/tp/college-interview-questions.htm

8. Recommend a good book to me.

The interviewer is trying to accomplish a few things with this question. First, the question asks whether or not you’ve actually read much. Second, it asks you to apply some critical skills as you articulate why a book is worth reading. And finally, your interviewer might get a good book recommendation!
Source: http://collegeapps.about.com/od/theartofgettingaccepted/tp/college-interview-questions.htm

9. If you could do one thing in high school differently, what would it be?

A question like this can turn sour if you make the mistake of dwelling on things you regret. Try to put a positive spin on it. Perhaps you’ve always wondered if you would have enjoyed acting or music. Maybe you would have liked to give the student newspaper a try. Maybe, in retrospect, studying Chinese might have been more in line with your career goals than Spanish. A good answer shows that you didn’t have the time in high school to explore everything that is of interest to you.

For more college questions, visit: http://collegeapps.about.com/od/theartofgettingaccepted/tp/interview-for-college.htm

Remember always – be true to yourself! College admissions is all about getting accepted to colleges where you will succeed as a student. Don’t get too wound-up in the “game” and create a new persona just to earn a spot in a coveted institution. Let everyone know what makes you unique, and you will succeed not only in gaining admissions offers but also, and more importantly, in finding the place where you will spend four of the greatest years of your life!

Conquering the SAT

Posted by: Claudine Vainrub, Principal of EduPlan on Aug 30 2010 / Comments (0)

What is SAT?

The SAT or Scholastic Aptitude Test is basically a standardized test for students that are interested in taking admission at US colleges and universities. The most important thing to note about this test is that it is owned by the College Board, a non-profit organization in the US. The College Board is of the opinion that SAT is a best medium to analyze whether a particular student is ready for a college or not.

The whole duration of SAT examination is three hours and forty-five minutes. However, most administrations, including materials distributions, biographical portions completion, orientation and more than ten minute of timed breaks, last for about four and a half hours. To appear in this examination, you need to spend $45. If you are not a US citizen, you need to spend $71.

Structure:

With regard to SAT structure, you need to deal with three main sections: Mathematics, Critical Reading and Writing. For every section, you will get a score on the scale of 200–800. Keep in mind that all scores are multiples of 10. For calculating final scores, your performance in all the three sections will be taken into account. Each section in the SAT examination is divided into three portions. You need to solve ten sub-sections, which includes an additional twenty five minute equating portion. You will find this portion in any of the three main sections. The main objective of equating portion is to standardize questions for future SAT administrations. The scores of equating portion are not going to have any impact on your final SAT score.

You will find wide variety of questions in SAT examination ranging from easy, hard to medium. Of course, everything will be dependent on your skill level. If you lack depth in your academic knowledge, you are going to be badly exposed during the test. According to experts, simpler questions normally appear in the starting of the section while tougher questions are there in the final parts of sections.

Critical Reading:

The Critical Reading section comprises of three scored sections. It includes two 25-minute sections and one section of twenty minute. Be prepared to answer questions related to passages and sentence completions. The Critical Reading sections generally start with three to five sentence completion questions followed by passage oriented questions. To attain success in sentence completions questions, it is of paramount importance that you have a proper understanding of sentence structure.

The major chunk of the Critical Reading questions consists of questions related to reading passages. To solve these questions, you need to go through short excerpts on physical sciences, social sciences and humanities. There are few sections that include passages where you need to compare two related passages. Questions are set in such a way that it will test your command over language.

Mathematics:

The Mathematics section is commonly known as the Quantitative Section. It includes three scored sections, pretty much similar to Critical Reading section. Out of three scored sections, one section is made up of twenty multiple choice questions. In second section, you need to solve eight multiple choice questions and ten grid-in questions. There is no penalty attached with grid-in questions. Last section is of twenty minute duration and you need to solve sixteen multiple choice questions.

Before you start preparing for Mathematics section of SAT, keep in mind that you are not going to get any quantitative comparison questions. Therefore, all your focus should be on questions with numerical or symbolic answers. The syllabus of Mathematics section includes scatter plots, trigonometry and algebra.

With some modifications being made to the syllabus of Mathematics section, you need to save time. This has led to the use of calculator programs by many students. The main benefit of these programs is that it helps students in solving problems more quickly. Ideally, you should go for a graphing calculator. With graphing calculator, you can solve geometry questions easily.

Writing

For the writing section of SAT examination, you need to solve multiple choice questions as well as write a brief essay. As a matter of fact, essay subscore offers more than twenty five percent towards the complete writing score. On the other hand, multiple choice questions contribute more than 70 percent. With regard to multiple choice questions, you need to solve paragraph improvement questions, sentence improvement questions and error identification questions. To write an essay, you will be given twenty five minutes.

SAT Challenges:

1-      To clear your SAT examination, you need to have a good fundamental knowledge of various mathematical concepts.

Tackling this challenge: To tackle this challenge, opt for SAT preparation courses. By doing this, you are going to get a detailed overview of fractions, equations, quantitative comparison and geometry related problems.

2-      To taste success in your SAT examination, you need to increase your concentration level.

Tackling this challenge: “Studying for four to five hours at a stretch is not easy. Indulge yourself in extracurricular activities. Take a break of ten minutes in between. This will not only increase your energy level but also refresh your mind,” said Yousuf Kamal who cleared SAT last year.

3-      Verbal section is one section where you can lose plenty of marks if you are not careful.

Tackling this challenge: “To get good score in verbal section, students need to have good vocabulary. Also, they need to practice sentence completion and answering analogy,” pointed out Ritesh Vishkarma of Infozee offering SAT preparation courses in India.

4-      Writing essay is never easy especially if your knowledge of current affairs is pretty limited.

Tackling this challenge: Make sure that you read newspapers and magazines on a daily basis. This will help you in making opinion on topics that are in trend.

Tips:

1-      When solving critical reading section, keep in mind that every single answer choice in the passage related questions comes directly from the text. That’s why, you should never make inferences.

2-      Instead of solving difficult questions first, focus on easy ones.

3-      Check out the pattern of past SAT examinations.

References:

http://ezinearticles.com/?SAT-Test-Preparation—A-Few-Questions-Answered&id=4324806

http://www.wisegeek.com/what-is-the-sat.htm

http://collegeapps.about.com/od/sat/f/goodsatscore.htm

Rankings and Choices

Posted by: Claudine Vainrub, Principal of EduPlan on Aug 24 2010 / Comments (0)

I am no fan of the rankings, they can lead to wrong college choices. However, with the new U.S. News College Rankings out last week, South Floridians have a lot to celebrate. Once more, the University of Miami located in Coral Gables, climbed in the rankings. This time, the climb was three spots, which placed UM for the very first time as the most prestigious university in the state of Florida. This is great news for the many south Florida families that want to support their children to receive a great education, while staying close to home. What was now a highly known school for partying and football is quickly gaining recognition as a top research institution where rigor is demanded from students, and talent is developed.

Becoming #1 of the state means that for the first time UM surpassed the renowned University of Florida in the rankings. UF, on the other hand, went down in the rankings to take position 53 and loose its place in the top 50. We have to take this news with a grain of salt, though. The real relevance is to be found on the fact that UM has escalated 20 spots in the last 9 years, which means that the institution has undergone a complete change of paradigm, devoting its attention to academia as the top priority of its President, Donna Shalala. The former Secretary of Health for President Clinton, Ms. Shalala earned higher education success experience while working with the University of Wisconsin, Madison, and also with Hunter College. As explained by The Miami Herald, through Shalala, UM has earned over $1,000 million in a single fundraising campaign, which is unprecedented in Florida. These new funds are being devoted to academia, which directly explains the newly gained recognition as a top research institution in the U.S.

There are several factors that directly affect the rankings, among them the alumni financial contribution to their alma mater. However, it is highly questionable that this piece of information, as many others measured for the U.S. News rankings, are valid when assessing an institution’s academic excellence. This is why many of us in the education industry question the rankings’ validity when assessing a school’s potential to support students into achieving a top education. Another interesting statistic that was used to support UM’s position hike is the percentage of students graduating from the university in six years, which rose from 70 to 80% a few years back. If we were to assess a top Venezuelan institution, such as Universidad Metropolitana de Caracas – UNIMET, by this statistic, would they be in trouble… With “filter” courses such as Calculus I and II, as reported by students, many students end up changing majors and even dropping out of the school. For some of their majors, the graduation rate does not go above 10%. Does this mean that the university is not competent as an institution of higher learning? This can be questioned, as the students who complete these rigorous courses have undergone a great stress test while showing strong academic proficiency, which has prepared them to conquer tough challenges and be more prepared to excel in the future. Nonetheless, this statistic is one taken under consideration when computing rankings.

The additional fundraising measured by the rankings does however benefit students and the school, as a larger endowment usually goes hand in hand with scholarship opportunities. Even international students demonstrating academic proficiency can become eligible for scholarships, which makes UM even more attractive for some top performing students who seek to be recognized and supported for their academic prowess. For many of us, this is still one of the most important aspects when choosing a college to attend, and a topic to discuss when comparing UM and UF, as the first demands about $37,000 in annual tuition, while the second’s costs can be around $5,000 per year for in-state students. We can pay a big ticket price or a small ticket price and still earn a top education. The fact that UM now has a larger endowment directly relates to attracting outstanding students that in the past would not have considered UM due to the lack of financial support.

So the question remains, how do we consider the rankings to make the best college admissions decision? Follow trends to understand if institutions are presenting strong growth and other signs of significant and positive (or negative) change. However, when looking at schools, seek detailed information and the opportunity to find the strengths and weaknesses, away from the numbers, the “look and feel”. These pieces of information will help you learn the most important thing to help your family make the right college decision, and that is your personal fit with the college. If when researching an institution you correlate the information with what your interests, passions, values and academic style is, your chances of success in that school are just a step away.

Department of Labor Video Contest

Posted by: Claudine Vainrub, Principal of EduPlan on Aug 9 2010 / Comments (0)

If you’d like to be eligible to win $1,000, here is an opportunity. The U.S. Department of Labor opened a contest for all public to submit a video describing their profession when yours in one of the 15 careers that shows most growth. “We’re inviting members of the public to produce and submit short (1 to 3 minute) videos focusing on the daily activities, necessary knowledge, skills, and abilities of one of 15 high-growth occupations. This includes Energy Auditors, Carpenters and Wind Turbine Service Technicians to name a few. The top three videos in each field will be eligible for a $1,000 prize, so tell us – What do you do?”

Check it out… http://www.dol.gov/dol/videochallenge.htm

The College Essay

Posted by: Claudine Vainrub, Principal of EduPlan on Aug 9 2010 / Comments (0)

The College Essay

One of the most important differentiators in college admissions can be the essays. How do adcoms choose between two college candidates with the same SAT scores, similar GPAs and great extracurricular activities? There is the interview, the rigor of the high school attended, the communications with the schools, but mostly, the essays. This is a tool that sells you to the university, but unlike junk mail, it has to be credible, believable, honest, interesting to read and depending on which university you’re applying to, targeted.

The goals of the essay are as follows: 1. Persuade, develop and maintain a well-reasoned argument. 2 Communicate in an interesting and professional way. 3. Display honesty and maturity. 4. Show in-depth understanding of the Program and of your potential contribution.

Unlike hotels and cruises, universities aren’t in the business of accepting anyone that applies. They say a chain is only as strong as its weakest link, and in academia the last thing universities want are students that will weaken the reputation of the school. Even so-called “party” schools need top students getting straight-A’s to increase their collective GPA’s.

Who are you writing for?

If you hate reading something boring, imagine the admissions officers at universities who read hundreds of essays every day as part of their job description.  In that environment, your challenge becomes to stand out from the pack. How do you do that? 1. Use believable ideas of where you are headed. 2. Use convincing evidence of your intellectual, managerial and leadership abilities without being dull. 3. Describe your career plan – colleges love people who know where they’re going. 4. Keep it organized, concise and error free. 5. Gain and maintain credibility by not exaggerating or lying.

Think of it as a job interview, would you hire someone who says he’s a great mechanic or someone with 5 years experience fixing cars? The answer is obvious.

Plan before you write:

Novelists don’t write hundreds of pages trying to figure out what they’re writing about, they already know! They have made outlines and thus their job is to fill in the blanks. Before pouring your heart and soul on a college essay you should plan before you start to write, think about what you should say, develop your material and make it interesting without being shocking,  and most importantly brand yourself (differentiate yourself from others and understand your uniqueness).

Essay Questions

Unless the school you’re applying to gives you specific topics to write about, chances are you will be developing your own. There are websites with dozens of essay questions you can use, consider the following examples:

-  Describe a significant interest or experience that has special meaning for you.

-  How have you grown and developed over the years?

-  Life is short. Why do you want to spend 5 or 6 years at a particular university or college?

-  What do you plan to do with your college degree?

-  Why have you chosen this career or profession?

Source:  http://www.goodessaytopics.com/college-application-essay-topics.html

So let’s say you want to write an essay about “Why you have chosen this career or profession.” One way to approach it is with the EduPlan developed DIGAS™ method.

DIGAS™:

- D          – Divide the question

- I            – Idea Organization

- G          – General to specific

- A          – Answer with return to intro

- S           – Share your inner-self

  • D –Divide the question: Divide the question in several small questions, answer EACH one of them.
  • I – Idea Organization: Write the sequence of your answer – i.e.: In the first paragraph, I will write about XYZ, in the second, I will write about ABC…, third paragraph about…
  • G – General to specific: Go from general info to specific providing examples on what you are confirming.
  • A – Answer with return to intro: The essay conclusion needs to recapitulate the original statement in some way, confirming it while not repeating it exactly, but closing back with the original idea exalted.
  • S – Share your inner-self: Be true to yourself and your thoughts, ideals, experiences and individuality – universities seek students with diverse viewpoints, interesting and unique, that give back and enrich classes with their own ideas towards development. Do not fear demonstrating who you are, what you know and how you learned this, do it with pride!

Let’s take an example of an essay that poses the question – What are your career goals and how do you plan to accomplish them? With an example career choice of Criminal Justice, here is how the DIGAS method is applied:

- D Divide the question: What are your career goals and how do you plan to accomplish them? These are two questions in one – Divide them into: 1- What are your Career Goals, and 2- How do you plan to accomplish your Career Goals. Both questions need to be thoroughly answered to write a great essay.

- I Idea Organization: Index your answer. To do this, take each question and make a list of the things you will discuss to answer it. For example, in this case, when answering Question #1 – What are your Career Goals, the following list could derive: 1- Criminal Justice as a career goal, 2- The type of things I would like to do in criminal justice, 3- What is happening with Criminal Justice nowadays in the workforce, 4- How my career choice of criminal justice will impact me, 5- And so on…

- G General to specific: Each idea in your new index is to be expanded on, however, what should be the used structure? Let’s take the second idea – The type of things I would like to do in criminal justice. To go from General to Specific, we can start discussing that Criminal Justice opens many career paths including law enforcement, law itself through the court system, and also corrections. In my specific case, (going more specific), I plan to pursue the law of courts, by eventually becoming a lawyer, and more specifically, one day I plan to become pursue criminal/penal law, representing cases where crimes like murder are questioned and the government is involved.

- A Answer with return to intro: Always draw an introduction and a conclusion. The intro should provide a brief summary of the topics of most relevance in the composition. The conclusion will return to the intro, confirming its validity to the writer and the reader, and stating something additionally that will tie it all together. Example of a conclusion: Becoming a criminal defense attorney is my goal as I seek to uphold constitutional rights in my work; defending crime victims will not only support my interests, but will help me become a contributing member of society.

- S Share your inner-self: It is very important to display your uniqueness in your essays and represent yourself, your thoughts and who you are to the fullest. Essays are meant to help adcoms get a better picture of the candidates, their interests, background, points of view. Don’t give the “right” answers unless they are your answers. Support your case and, if you are honest,  schools will recognize if you have a good fit with their program, increasing not only your admission chances but also your success chances, once you are a student at a particular college/university.

Once you complete the five stages, review the essay to ensure all steps were taken, revising anything that might have been overlooked. The beauty of the DIGAS™ method is that if you follow it closely, the essay will flow, helping you successfully complete the writing process when discussing college admissions.

Example of Great Writing
Use vivid and specific facts with your main idea.

  • Bad: “I like to be surrounded by people with a variety of backgrounds and interests”
  • Good: “During that night, I sang the theme song from Casablanca with a baseball coach who thinks he’s Bogie, discussed Marxism with a little old lady, and heard more than I ever wanted to know about some woman’s gall bladder operation.”
    Source: http://www.collegeboard.com/student/apply/essay-skills/9406.html

Be Specific
Try not to use clichéd, predictable and generic writing but rather vivid and specific details.

  • Okay: “I want to help people. I have gotten so much out of life through the love and guidance of my family, I feel that many individuals have not been as fortunate; therefore, I would like to expand the lives of others.”
  • Better: “My Mom and Dad stood on plenty of sidelines ’til their shoes filled with water or their fingers turned white, or somebody’s golden retriever signed his name on their coats in mud. I think that kind of commitment is what I’d like to bring to working with fourth-graders.”
    Source: http://www.collegeboard.com/student/apply/essay-skills/9406.html

Editing
Did you know all famous writers edit their work BEFORE sending it to an editor? In the cases of books, we’re talking 300 to 500 or more pages. So in your case, what’s the big deal about 500 words? Plenty. Editing will allow you improve your draft, fix errors, and get another pair of eyes to give you feedback.

  • Let It Cool: Take a break from your work and come back to it in a few days. Does your main idea come across clearly? Do you prove your points with specific details? Is your essay easy to read aloud?
  • Feedback Time: Have someone you like and trust (but someone likely to tell you the truth) read your essay. Ask them to tell you what they think you’re trying to convey. Did they get it right?
  • Edit Down: Your language should be simple, direct, and clear. This is a personal essay, not a term paper. Make every word count (e.g., if you wrote “in society today,” consider changing that to “now”).
  • Proofread Two More Times: Careless spelling or grammatical errors, awkward language, or fuzzy logic will make your essay memorable—in a bad way.
    Source: http://www.collegeboard.com/student/apply/essay-skills/9405.html

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